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Post by tyleryork on Sept 18, 2013 19:02:52 GMT -5
The Salopian Star" Tyler York
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 217 lbs
Age: 19
Birth Place: Shrewsbury Shropshire, England
Billed From: Shrewsbury Shropshire, England
attitude: Respectful, and honorable
Ring Attire: Trunks, and Cool Blue/black Kickpads.
Casual Attire: T-Shirt, and Shorts.
Theme Song: The Phoenix- Fall Out Boy
Disposition: Face
Wrestle Style: Shoot Style - Indy Wrestler
Finishers: 1. Roundhouse Kick. 2. Single Leg High Knee. 3. Lebell Lock
Signatures: 1. LionSault. 2. Inverted Frankensteiner.
Brief Biography: As a kid Tyler York watched the Early Attitude Era progress, and loved it, ever since he's been into wrestling. He's competed at high schools, gyms, and even backyards just to make cash. Now he is looking to the Robbie Scotts Gym to improve his craft.
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Post by Hana Brightly on Sept 22, 2013 20:19:01 GMT -5
I believe your wrestling style doesn't fit your biography, or the other information presented.
Tyler York was a fan of the Attitude era, he's 19 and competed in gyms and backyards. While "indy wrestler" would definitely fit the description his "shoot-style" wouldn't. Based on the profile, he was a fan of the entertainment aspect of professional wrestling, as the early attitude era was all about character progression and creating unique personalities to draw in viewers.
"Shoot-style" completely contradicts this aspect as "shoot-style" of professional wrestling is about the authenticity of the moves presented in the wrestling ring. How they could legit hurt someone and cause severe harm to their opponents. It's not about performing "safe" maneuvers, or even putting on an "entertaining" match, it's about winning and applying moves to make your opponent lose.
It takes training from specific individuals to learn how to properly "shoot" in wrestling and since your character is 19 and only holds experience through gyms and backyards it wouldn't make sense that he would have shoot aspects to his character. Instead, he should have more of an "entertainment" aspect towards his character and moveset. Moves that will make people want to cheer and get behind him, and not based around his ability to legitimately hurt someone.
I do like the profile, and I think you have a really nice base, but you have to make sure your information supports the profile and not contradict it.
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Post by J.P Masters on Sept 22, 2013 20:23:07 GMT -5
we have enough students at this point, when we are looking for more feel free to repost your application
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