Jack Star

[itsseekor]

real name:Jack Suvince
ring name: Jack Star
age:26
train by: Brent Delivine, screech, Danoose, Frank E Flo, and Dallas B
nickname:The Only and Only True Star
Federation: TVW, IWE,CCE,and RCWE
Personality: He try's his best at everything but no one gives him credit
Hometown:Sacramento,California
Billed From: California
Theme Song:Deepfield-Nothing to Lose
DISPOSITION: The crowd doesn't give him credit for his ability
Wrestling style:Elbows and Punches
moves: Springboard shoulder block,Rolling Elbow,and Combination of punches
Finishers:Arm Grab Pump Handle Slam,The Hart Lock
signatures: Rolling Elbow 3,Corner Back Elbow
Bio
Jack Star is a rising star with great ability.He has been trained by some of the best.
Some people like Brent Delivine,Rebellion,Franklin Eberdean,Dallas Blaike, and Mark Shinomori.Jack Star has great potential and could use training everyday to get better.He could use a push at anytime.GT:Its Seekor

Attachments:

[J.P Masters]

nice add JJP107 an ill give u a Match Later

[J.P Masters]

was a good match will pass on all info to Alex stryder an rest of the staff

welcome to the gym

[Hana Brightly]

As with Chris Madness's profile, your biography needs to expand more than just who he's worked with and his strive for success.

He's "The One and Only True Star" Jack Star, but his profile doesn't explain why. You claim he doesn't get get the credit he deserves but you don't expand on the reasons why. Is he heel? Face? Does the audience connect with his inability to achieve that credit? I don't know. I can't tell from reading what you presented to us so far. From what I can tell, you and Chris Madness are essentially the same characters because your biographies are exactly alike and that's a bad thing. You need to differentiate yourself and explain what makes Jack Star who he is.